HALLOWEENSIE CONTEST!!!!!
Hosted by Susanna Leonard Hill
Post your story on your blog between now and Thursday October 31st by 11:59 PM EDT.
Fly me to my Room
by Manju B. Howard
With a trick-or-treat
brew of sweets
making
her tummy twitch,
Gail
curled up in a cozy chair
wearing
the pointy hat of a witch.
“Time for
bed,” her mother cackled.
But Gail hugged
her black cat instead.
“To bed,”
her mother crowed,
while
sweeping up bits of candy.
Gail shook
her head.
“Spooky creatures want to find me.
They know
I’m full of treats.
Orange
clowns, pink bunnies and
wizards
with wands will smell my feet
and think
I’m something good to eat.
“Dear Mother
Witch,
please take
me on your broom
and fly
me to my room.”
Wizards with wands will smell my feet! Great line. Nice job, Manju!
ReplyDeleteWhat a great Halloween bedtime tale. Very creative and fun! Great job, Manju!
ReplyDeleteThank you Penny and Cheryl. It was a fun challenge.
ReplyDeleteSounds like Gail is in for belly ache nightmares, Manju! :0)
ReplyDeleteClimbing the stairway to dreamland is difficult with a tummy full of treats! that was a fun read.
ReplyDeleteI especially love your last stanza.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comments - Donna, Grannymar and Joanna.
ReplyDeleteOh, what a lovely idea! To be flown to your room by broomstick to avoid any ghoulies and ghosties that might be hanging about :) Although I'm a little worried that Gail might be in for a few nightmares caused by her overindulgence in sweets :) Thanks so much for joining in the fun, Manju!
ReplyDelete"Wizards with wands will smell my feet and think I'm something good to eat." Hilarious!!!!
ReplyDelete(Also, bonus points for naming her Gail. ;)
Gail, Glad I could make you laugh. Cheers!
ReplyDeleteI was humming "fly me to the moon" while reading your story! Well, till I started laughing at those smelly feet! :-)
ReplyDelete"Fly me to my room" -- if the broom will take off after all those treats! Fun story, Manju!
ReplyDeleteThis made me smile: "...will smell my feet and think I’m something good to eat". If they smelled my boys' feet, they'd move on to the next house!
ReplyDeleteHello, Manju...nice to meet you! Susanna's contests are so much fun. Lucky little witch who gets flown up to her room on a broom.:) This was very poetic.
ReplyDeleteLoved this one. I'm sure lots of tummies will be twitching on Halloween.
ReplyDeleteIt's Spook-a-lious to connect with fellow writers. Thanks for your contest, Susanna.
ReplyDeleteHow scary it would be to be a treat on Halloween!
ReplyDeleteGreat story..made me smile :D
ReplyDeleteI knew I'd like your story from the moment I read the title. Nice play on words!
ReplyDeleteLOVE LOVE LOVE your title. Couldn't stop singing Sinatra's Fly Me to the Moon when I first saw it on Susanna's blog page. :) I love the stubborn little girl--sounds like a child of mine. :)
ReplyDeleteThe title sent my thoughts to the rat pack. This was nice. It could be any child. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThanks to all of you. I'm trying to get through all your great stories.
ReplyDeleteA refreshing change to show a young witch feeling vulnerable to us scary muggles-- well done!
ReplyDeleteLove the fact that even witches have to drag their children off to bed on Halloween night. Fun twist!
ReplyDeleteLove your poem and the idea of not wanting Halloween to end.
ReplyDeleteHappy Halloween! :)
I love the image of a tired little witch asking to be flown to her room. The Halloween version of "Carry me."
ReplyDeleteHi Manju! So good to finally see your blog (plus photo) and connect again. I love the title of your story. . .what fun. I guess our critique group got so busy we all stopped communicating. I trust things are going well for you!
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